Monday, October 19, 2015

Grief Train

When did the hallucinations begin? My brother has been dead for a month. When did the hallucinations begin? I called my mother from New York, two months before my brother died. She said she was ok and that I should not worry. She said I was with her all the time, I even slept with her. Her comment did not make me think about grief, it made me think about of contentment. A feeling that I was always with her in spirit, a comment born of compassion, giving me freedom to enjoy my vacation.

When did the hallucinations begin? Seeing the cat in the house, when it was in the yard? Waking up to see her mother and my father standing in her bedroom and her offering to make them breakfast. My mother does very little cooking or eating these days. Today I prepared three meals for her and she ate only one. She sits in her chair watching the Russian television station with no sense of time and in the company of hallucination of me and her dead mother, offering them oranges. Is she a victim of depression?

When did the hallucinations begin? My brother died a month ago at the age of 67, my mother’s only son; my only sibling. A parent should not outlive their child. My mother is 92 years old and she told me while he was sick that she wished she could trade places with her son. She had lived a long life and he deserved more time. She did not have that power. My brother had been fighting cancer for 18 months.

When did the hallucinations begin? My mother did not visit when he was sick. There were excuses. It was too far to travel. It was too difficult a trip. It was an 8 hour drive, admittedly a long time to travel in a car for a woman of her age. She did not offer financial help for the enormous doctor bills or the loss of income by brother and his wife had to contend with. Admittedly she was concerned about conserving her money for her own care. She barely spoke to him on the phone. Admittedly it was difficult to hear the pain in his voice and know she could not make him better. Is she a victim of guilt?

When did the hallucinations begin? She has been slipping slowly over the last year or so, sharing the company of more and more friends and loved ones that only she can see. I thought it was the end coming for her. People tell stories of the aged hallucinating at the end, but she has been doing it longer then the anecdotal accounts foretell. I thought it might be dementia but she remembers my children’s birthdays and how much money she sent them last year.

I know now that the hallucinations give her comfort. She is a passenger on the grief train. Everyone takes a trip on that train after the loss of someone dear. The duration and the route of the trip is very personal. Some people never return from the trip. Like those wives who loses their spouse of 60 years and die a few months later. While I ride along dealing with the loss of my brother I wonder if my mother will just slowly slip away from me, not able to come to terms with the death of her only son, who strangely, is never one of her imaginary visitors. 

Tuesday, July 10, 2012

All About the Blog

Just so you know, the website is gone. Blog is free and the website was not; so now it is all about the blog.

Thursday, January 20, 2011

The Pilgrimage

Today I finished reading my friend Sara Caka's manuscript, The Pilgrimage. It was really great. I look forward to sharing my editorial suggestions with her. Look out for this book. It is about an archeologist superwoman, romance and gun running. Very unique combination and a good read.

Monday, November 29, 2010

NaNoWritMo


I did it. I wrote 50000 words in 30 days, well actually 28 days, I did not need the other two days. Someone else can have them. Wait, you can't do that.

This was an amazing experience. It happens once a year and everyone who wants to exercise their writing chops should give it a try.

At first I could not imagine finishing such a daunting task and then it became easier to write the 1667 words per day, (50000 divided by 30) and then it seemed like smooth sailing. Until the first power outage, one day lost. I made that up and got a little ahead by going to the half way party write in at Hugo House. Well I figured I earned a day off, which somehow morphed into 3 days off. Then my mother had every doctor appointment imaginable the next week, but I managed to write the daily minimum, but remember I am now 3 days behind. On the 23nd we were hit by a pre-Thanksgiving snow storm that took out our power for 2 days. Now I am 5 days behind, which in NaNo days equals 8335 words. The power comes back on very late on Wednesday, so no writing. Ok that makes it 6 days and a 10002 word deficit, 1/5 of the project behind! Wait we are not done getting behind. Thanksgiving day, writing, nada. Finally I catch a break, Friday there is power, my mother is happy. I get to write and I write until my carpal laden hands loose all feeling. Saturday, oops, Mom needs me. So I don't get to the keyboard until 8 pm that night but I am now wearing my newly purchased, thank god for Rite Aide, IMAK, SmartGloves and my carpal pain magically disappears and I am off to the races. At 2 am I am falling asleep and the keyboard, so I go to bed. But I am on a roll, I produce 9800 words in those two days. I am almost caught up right. Well not exactly because each day the 1667 words continue to add up, so the backlog is shrinking but not going away. I wake up early Sunday morning and after my double espresso nothing is in my way. I have 7500 words to produce and I am determined to stay up until I do it. If I succeed this will be my biggest day ever. My mother cooperates and leaves me alone until dinner. I am back at the keyboard at 8pm write until 10pm when I have to pick my husband up from the ferry. Now I have 3600 words left to write. I hang with my hubby who has been gone for 4 days, he gets an hour of my time. Come on I have to write! And I do it. I finish the 50000 words. I roll into bed at 3:30am after downloading my manuscript for word count verification and getting back my confirmation an Winners Certificate.

The first day of the event, it took me all day, meaning all the time I could find to write in the day to produce the 1700 words and it was difficult. And on the last day I was able to produce 7500 words.

If you go to the gym every day for a month, at the end of the month your body is in better shape and this contest was like a workout for the mind. A marathon of creativity. It affected me greatly. I feel more like a writer. I feel undaunted by the concept of writing a novel and I have most of the first draft of a book that I would like to take through revisions.

So I am took today off and tomorrow I put in my time; 1700 words a day until I get through the first draft of the novel, which should be Dec 31st. Then I have 10 months to revise, revise and revise to produce a clean final copy of my first novel so I can be ready to start my second one at next year's NaNoWriMo event.

A novel a year. A goal that somehow seems possible thanks to NaNo.

So that's what's happening. Thanks for the visit. Keep writing!

Sunday, October 3, 2010

A Lot Has Happened

A lot has happened since my last post. I have edited a children's book by Harel Lawrence and helped the author find an illustrator, Braden Duncan. The illustrating work is scheduled to start later this month. I can not wait to see what Braden comes up with. I will keep you posted. I edited Cirque Du Salahi, by Diane Dimond. It was very exciting to get a chance to work with such a well known journalist on her book. My internship ended. I miss the gang at Martin Literary Management, but I am excited to get on to the next adventure. Stay tuned.

Saturday, June 26, 2010

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Question of the Day.


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Sunday, May 30, 2010

Website in the Works

Website coming! I just got my domain through GoDaddy. judywritesandedits.com. I will let you know when I am up and running. Very exciting.